Teacher Rough Cut Feedback

Feedback on Representation of Artist:
It is difficult to comment on this as your artist is in theory a cartoon man. In which case there could be more close-ups on your drawn man.
Perhaps you could incorporate more of the 'sweet tangerine' man and those sequences.


General Feedback:

I really like your video, I think the child-like aesthetic really works. The ending is great.
Obviously it isn't in the correct order and I'm sure once it is it will be even stronger.
you do need to add some filters to some sections where the lighting becomes inconsistent.
Also you may wish to explore the use of transitions between your scenes.

Excellent work so far - keep going!

Teacher Feedback on Pitch and Blog

Your pitch was excellent, it was clear that you have very concrete ideas for your promo video, your digipak and your magazine ad. It was also clear that you had thought about how to link these three products visually, which is also very good. I am confident that all group members are contributing equally at this stage and that you know exactly what your next steps are.
Your blog is reflective of the work you have put in so far. It is very important that you start making the backgrounds and characters as soon as possible. It might be nice to have some individual visuals, possibly rough sketches or found images from the internet, to illustrate the overall look you are going for with your characters and backgrounds. This will help your blog to communicate the mise-en-scene you want to achieve, it currently doesn't do that as well as it could.
Fantastic work so far, keep it up.